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Sunday, October 25, 2009

Kuch aise hi..

My first attempt at vernacular poetry..

Tanhai ab meethi lagne lagi hai,
aur kadvi lag rahi hai logon ka saath.
Kuch aise hi hain aaj ke haalaath.

Dua karne se ab darta hai dil.
Inhi duaon se kayeen hue aabaad.
Inhi duaon se khud hue barbaad.

Bade ajeeb se din katthe hain hamaare.
Din ya raat, hosh ka koi khabar nahi.
Kya karein? Hothon ko sharaab jo paak lagne lagi.

Mann karta hai unse do lafz kahein.
Javaab sunne ke liye par ab dil nahi betaab.
Ab to hothon par bhi rakha hai hamne naqaab.

11 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Beautiful....

October 28, 2009 at 10:59 PM  
Blogger Farah said...

gee...thanks!

October 31, 2009 at 12:18 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU!!!!!

October 31, 2009 at 12:01 PM  
Blogger Farah said...

Q1-Is anonymous of comment1 and anonymous of comment 2 the same person?

Q2-Anonymous of comment 2 would not have posted that had he/she not known me!!! Reveal thy self and you shall get an answer :)

October 31, 2009 at 12:15 PM  
Anonymous rahul said...

waah waa, waah waa

October 31, 2009 at 12:17 PM  
Blogger Farah said...

mera pehla 'waah'! Thank you :)

October 31, 2009 at 12:20 PM  
Blogger trevis said...

Nice one !!

October 31, 2009 at 12:46 PM  
Blogger DDey said...

spectacular. hope it's the first of many.

October 31, 2009 at 1:03 PM  
Blogger Farah said...

thankoo all!

November 1, 2009 at 8:41 AM  
Blogger Basav Biradar said...

Awesome.. loved it. you should probably suggest us some books of urdu poetry.
keep writing

January 4, 2010 at 6:50 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

That's beautiful. Stumbled upon your blog.

December 15, 2010 at 5:16 AM  

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